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Do you feel the pain I feel when you say good bye
Do you know how much it rips my insides
We will never feel alive, not like we did in the beginning
So much time has passed, so much pain, so much sinning
And so I walk down this road in the rain, alone, without you
I cant be helped by you, you cannot help me, there is nothing you can do
It never felt like we were alive, except in the beginning, that first night
Back in the days, before you changed my life
I was too busy being in love with my past
That when we met again, I didn’t see what I saw at the last
That you were not you, that you no longer had the same face
That it was no longer your love, but a stranger’s, your old love to embrace
I seek that, not you, not the you that I see now
It can no longer be a story of us, but how
How you destroyed us, every time you said goodbye
Not that we were destroyed, but that I died
Happiness left me, and so did you
The sky turned black, when to anyone else they were blue
Grass is red, but to you its green, my skin blue, cold, like your heart
Not like the us I remember, before you tore me apart
Before you said goodbye, and you changed forever
Before you came back over and over to find more to sever
Did it ever feel like we were alive
Did it ever in your eyes
I no longer see the you I loved at first, the one from before I died
Now that I’ve realized you’re not the same girl, a tear falls as I say… our last goodbye
©2007-2009 ~MorbisPsyche
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old poem i wrote
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My smallish brain is too teeny to understand it comepletely, but my senses can tell that it is pretty awesome lol :D :P

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:heart: "Maybe i'll try getting caught." :heart:
-Yoh (High School Debut)
thanks... thanks is what i should be saying right... i think u confused me on if that is good or bad

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These Scars Tell Stories, Stories my heart doesnt want to remember.~Me
Its As Plain As Anyone Can See, We are Simply Meant to Be!~Jack Skellington
"It is not by wrath that one kills, but by laughter...' ~Friedrich Nietzsche
IT'S AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!! (sorry I'm a really confusing person...) heh...

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:heart: "Maybe i'll try getting caught." :heart:
-Yoh (High School Debut)
I <3 it. Plain and simple :P

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Watch the Heartless dance!!!! :evillaugh:
eh its cool, and thanks

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These Scars Tell Stories, Stories my heart doesnt want to remember.~Me
Its As Plain As Anyone Can See, We are Simply Meant to Be!~Jack Skellington
"It is not by wrath that one kills, but by laughter...' ~Friedrich Nietzsche
thanks...

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These Scars Tell Stories, Stories my heart doesnt want to remember.~Me
Its As Plain As Anyone Can See, We are Simply Meant to Be!~Jack Skellington
"It is not by wrath that one kills, but by laughter...' ~Friedrich Nietzsche
you should check out my poems :D

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:heart: "Maybe i'll try getting caught." :heart:
-Yoh (High School Debut)
Different to your usual style :)
More straight to the point :)
very well done :)

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:tribute:...The Lotus is a flower that rises from the mud...:tribute:
The deeper the mud, the more beautiful the lotus blooms.
i will... when i have lots of time lol

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These Scars Tell Stories, Stories my heart doesnt want to remember.~Me
Its As Plain As Anyone Can See, We are Simply Meant to Be!~Jack Skellington
"It is not by wrath that one kills, but by laughter...' ~Friedrich Nietzsche

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