Well....letsasee. I like the way you did under the eyes. To me is extremely realistic. The background and lighting though...don't really match.

To the left where there is the wall of the bathroom, it looks like a swimming pool. Like when the light reflects off the water onto the walls. To the right though where you blacked it out you have that really bright white spot on your head from a light source and it doesn't match up with the darker right side. So there is kind of a lighting issue for me. That may be they way it was but it bothers me lol.

I like your expression. to me it sort of looks like a pissed off 'are you serious?' It's cute.

As for the setting...i like the tub in the backround but the sink bothers me. I think it's the lighting on the sink. It makes it stand out too much and it draws attention away from your face.

Hope this...blabbering helps you xD if not that's kool too

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very helpful, and yes, u got ne ideas on getting rid of the light on meh face??

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I don't really think there is much you can do with the light on your face unless you wanna spend a massive amount of time infront of the computer cloning the other colors of your face over the white area. :\ Besides that i can't think of anything. watching the lighting when you take the picture is the easiest thing to do.

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ima work on it alot so as i out uo more and more just let me know what u think ok??

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i will i will be your regular critic xD

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Noticed you asked about the light on your face. I agree with the person you were talking to about the cloning. grab up the bright area, use the cloner to make it a reasonably solid color that matches the face, reshade with burn and dodge (i assume your using photoshop) Ignore that they said there isn't much you can do about it. Anything is possible in digital art, shouldn't be too hard once you find the right method. This picture has a lot of potential, excellent pose

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